The Primister Kevin Rudd has been in and out of hospitals lately but no because his sick, Kevin is trying to help our health system because people who need medical surgery fast cannot get it because there is not an enough medical facilities in Australian hospitals.
My question was why not just buy more? Well I did some research and medical machinery cost billions of dollars. People are getting scared if they can’t get medical surgery fast they can get really sick and die.
Some people have private health cover and have to an allowance a month and get medical surgery faster than other people who don’t have it. Everyone in Australia has Medicare; Medicare is a requirement for Australians to have it, the basic Medicare people are not satisfied with so they pay more for private health cover.
I think the heath system could improve by every house hold has to pay $100 a year witch well cover the expenses. Learn more by looking on www.abc.net.au/news/btn/story/52639908.hm

You have the basis for an excellent report here Bonnie. The information about health care is organised successfully into paragraphs, and you have written a good introduction. What you could do to improve your report is proof read it carefully, have someone else check it and also do a little more research into exactly how much everyone is currently paying for Medicare, and what you think might be possible if everyone paid a little bit more. You have done a great job, but with a little more work your article can be outstanding.